I do like the concept! The animation is admittedly crude, but I'll confess, I am a sucker for that kind of stuff. You've definitely got ideas though. I'll admit, I watched this quite a few times!
I do like the concept! The animation is admittedly crude, but I'll confess, I am a sucker for that kind of stuff. You've definitely got ideas though. I'll admit, I watched this quite a few times!
Thank you for the honest review! I’ll definitely make more animations based off feedback
Extremely well made, love the presentation! The whole rhyme thing was unexpected, but it worked nicely, and all the rhymes were very satisfying. You managed to capture the atmosphere well through the ambience of the rain and reverbed voice. And of course, you made your way through all the different worlds seamlessly. Very well done! I'll definitely be watching the others.
Thank you very much!!!
It's a nice little short, I seriously like that art style and the overall look, and the concept is quite funny! I think you could add a bit more to it though, perhaps make the whole thing more than a single shot that pans. Pretty good though. I like it!
Thanks for your honesty and constructive feedback.
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